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Open Poetry #46

The Words Of Anguish

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2010-03-10 05:48 AM

Surrounded by my past,
I have discovered a lot.
I have discovered at last
The anguish of loss in my chest.
This anguish is all that I've got.

Surrounded by this gloom,
I only want to break through.
I only want thoughts to bloom
Like weeds by a foreigner's tomb.
He fought for the word, proven true.

Surrounded by this mist,
I have apparently drown.
I have apparently missed
The time that still runs through my fists.
My anger could burn it all down...

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-03-10 07:33 PM

Yo dear April,

This is quite good. Keep up the good work.

Love Bobby

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-03-11 08:42 AM

Cool stuff. I like the rhythm you write with.
Waiting for more.

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