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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2010-03-07 10:47 AM

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Waves of love

*

I can feel
overwhelming
waves of love
building in the ocean
of consciousness
within my center.

I can’t keep them
from erupting through
the valve of my heart
and splashing particles
of pink onto my cheeks.

My breath wants
to mingle with yours
to give rise to
an indomitable
storm of passion
brushing our
lips of desire.

Come closer now
hold me tight
while we ride
our magnetic waves.
Show me how
to balance on the crests
fearlessly and blissfully
as if we were child stars
in a fairy tale.

Swing me off
any limitations
into the realm of reality
which opens its gates
only to lovers
who are out
of their minds,
fully heart centered,
to recognize
the wonder
of an unencumbered
fusion of souls.

*

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

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1 posted 2010-03-07 10:54 AM

Oh my oh my, my dear! What has gotten into the air around here, or should I say water, as in waves of passion? Margy, you just made me blush, thank you for that. I now have a warm pinkish glow to go with the one in my heart after reading such words. I think you delved very deep for this one, it is one of my all time favorites of your's and let me tell you, these words, really become you.

Bless your sweet soul my dear, this was a real piece of your loving heart.

Loved it!
Richard

Margherita
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2 posted 2010-03-07 11:08 AM

Thank you, dear Richie, for your loving effervescent reply ... you brought a

and I too

look like this now!
I can't stop writing love poems, my heart won't allow it!
M

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2010-03-07 11:53 AM

hello Margherita, this is overwhelming, your poem is a fusion of words and sentiments and is breathtaking, you enlarge the horizon of love and lovers...Thank you for the wonderful poem...

yann

passing shadows
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4 posted 2010-03-07 12:47 PM

M this is really hot! I would say it needed to be in the Insights forum but tastefully done indeed!

Whew! Someone turn the AC on!

Margherita
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5 posted 2010-03-07 01:21 PM

Thank you, dear Yann, for your loving comment and for truly entering the spirit of this poem.

Dear Dixie, thank you for stopping by and for your "warm" comment. Though this is not meant to be "hot" in that way, the merging of two souls of course may suggest total oneness on all levels and I do love to convey this kind of total oneness, I won't deny that, but I primarily "feel" and speak of the spiritual oneness of two souls.

Now, this is going to make me blush for the second time

...

Love and joy.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-03-07 01:46 PM

Your heart knows what it is doing, Margherita.
Ida

Alison

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7 posted 2010-03-07 02:13 PM

I thought I was having a hot flash and then I realized I was reading your poetry, Margherita! This is passion at its best - and written with style and grace. Which you always show that you have.

Love you,
A

Margherita
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8 posted 2010-03-08 11:24 AM

Thank you both from my heart, dear Ida and dear Alison, for your loving comments! Yes, my heart knows! ... and yes I would never "cross the lines" of decency, yet passion is passion!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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Oregon

9 posted 2010-03-08 04:11 PM

Margherita, The first stanza is a perfect opening to this poem because that consciouness is the foundation for every possibility love holds...that desire to be conscious and vibrant and overwhelmingly alive.

How often it arrives with relationship to a kindred spirit! Somehow, I suspect you have it a all, wholly in your own heart, and it reflects back, a gift gaining momentum. There is joy in those passionate words, and the essence overflows vibrantly!

Karen

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2010-03-08 05:42 PM

Margherita you write your thoughts and desires so good...James

threadbear
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Indy

11 posted 2010-03-09 04:42 PM

It takes the heart of a lover
to know the soul of another.
Your talented words are velvet to the mind,
Jeff

inkedgoddess
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Ohio

12 posted 2010-03-09 05:00 PM

you make it easy to believe again

Ericc
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13 posted 2010-03-09 05:47 PM

simply stunning...and one of your (all time) best.

Love,
Eric

Margherita
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Eternity

14 posted 2010-03-11 06:50 PM

Thank you so much, dear Karen, for your very vibrating reply! Yes, I have it, in my heart.

Thank you very much, dear James, your romantic nature knows about these feelings, it reflects in your own poems.

Dear Jeff, that is a very lovely reply, thank you.

Believe, believe, dear Michele! And give us a poetic rendering of your beliefs

. Thank you so much.

Eriiiiiiiiiiic! Dear Eric, I always jump in joy when I see you here, because you are very much missed. Thank you for telling me you enjoyed it! Post some of your new creations?

Love to all,
Margherita

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

15 posted 2010-03-11 09:43 PM

Ahhhh....now I see why Jaime replied on his own the way he did.

Well done, my friend.

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

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Osaka, Japan

16 posted 2010-03-12 04:36 PM

`Splashing particles of pink onto my cheeks` - Oh, how I wish I had written that line! Excellent use of collocations.

kudanesh
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Peterborough,England

17 posted 2010-03-13 10:40 AM

well you know I am a fan and this is another wonderful reason why. gold star from me...your never a let down. always a wonderful read, image and sound

kudanesh
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18 posted 2010-03-13 10:41 AM

well you know I am a fan and this is another wonderful reason why. gold star from me...your never a let down. always a wonderful read, image and sound (I mean when I read it out) lol.

gilead
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nevada, USA

19 posted 2010-03-13 11:56 AM

Oh, this is so replete with unbridled passion, and so artfully expressed; I am almost without words---beauty enfolded in beauty. This is magnificence in verse well wrought! Thanks for a great poem, dear Margherita --

Art

Billie Cullimore
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20 posted 2010-03-14 11:53 PM

Dear, dear Lady and I do mean Lady. Only a person with a loving heart could have so much love for others. You are special.
Love 'un stuff

Billie C.

The Lady
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The Southwest

21 posted 2010-03-19 12:33 PM

"Show me how
to balance on the crests
fearlessly and blissfully
as if we were child stars
in a fairy tale."

you write, I feel.

this is delightful Margherita.

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

22 posted 2010-03-20 06:40 AM

I always unable to describ words of the thank especially for people
which are characterize by tender Without Borders .
the words of thank alwayes be extremely difficult when formulating.

thanks my dear friend

love
Nourzihane

Martie

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23 posted 2010-03-20 02:28 PM

Ahhhh...to balance thus on waves of love sounds effortless as written in this amazing poem. It makes me want to fly. Happy spring to you, Margherita!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

24 posted 2010-03-20 05:10 PM

This is really wonderful poetic reasoning. The mind shift of a different approach done with such elegance and purity.

You're still writing wonderful mind scenes my dear!

Eric

Margherita
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Eternity

25 posted 2010-03-21 04:17 PM

I am so pleased by the presence on this thread of old and new Poet friends with such heart warming comments.

Thank you all, dear ones.

Love,
Margherita

Gumpy
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26 posted 2010-10-25 11:50 PM

Hi Margherita. long time since i've been on to read. Nice to see you still gracing everyone with your wonderfully written words.
You make me hold on to a pebble of hope that true love might still be found.
Gumpy

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