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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Waves of love * I can feel overwhelming waves of love building in the ocean of consciousness within my center. I can’t keep them from erupting through the valve of my heart and splashing particles of pink onto my cheeks. My breath wants to mingle with yours to give rise to an indomitable storm of passion brushing our lips of desire. Come closer now hold me tight while we ride our magnetic waves. Show me how to balance on the crests fearlessly and blissfully as if we were child stars in a fairy tale. Swing me off any limitations into the realm of reality which opens its gates only to lovers who are out of their minds, fully heart centered, to recognize the wonder of an unencumbered fusion of souls. * |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh my oh my, my dear! What has gotten into the air around here, or should I say water, as in waves of passion? Margy, you just made me blush, thank you for that. I now have a warm pinkish glow to go with the one in my heart after reading such words. I think you delved very deep for this one, it is one of my all time favorites of your's and let me tell you, these words, really become you. Bless your sweet soul my dear, this was a real piece of your loving heart. Loved it! Richard  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Richie, for your loving effervescent reply ... you brought a and I too  look like this now! I can't stop writing love poems, my heart won't allow it! M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Margherita, this is overwhelming, your poem is a fusion of words and sentiments and is breathtaking, you enlarge the horizon of love and lovers...Thank you for the wonderful poem... yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M this is really hot! I would say it needed to be in the Insights forum but tastefully done indeed! Whew! Someone turn the AC on! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Yann, for your loving comment and for truly entering the spirit of this poem. Dear Dixie, thank you for stopping by and for your "warm" comment. Though this is not meant to be "hot" in that way, the merging of two souls of course may suggest total oneness on all levels and I do love to convey this kind of total oneness, I won't deny that, but I primarily "feel" and speak of the spiritual oneness of two souls.  Now, this is going to make me blush for the second time ...Love and joy. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your heart knows what it is doing, Margherita. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I thought I was having a hot flash and then I realized I was reading your poetry, Margherita! This is passion at its best - and written with style and grace. Which you always show that you have. Love you, A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you both from my heart, dear Ida and dear Alison, for your loving comments! Yes, my heart knows! ... and yes I would never "cross the lines" of decency, yet passion is passion! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita, The first stanza is a perfect opening to this poem because that consciouness is the foundation for every possibility love holds...that desire to be conscious and vibrant and overwhelmingly alive. How often it arrives with relationship to a kindred spirit! Somehow, I suspect you have it a all, wholly in your own heart, and it reflects back, a gift gaining momentum. There is joy in those passionate words, and the essence overflows vibrantly! Karen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Margherita you write your thoughts and desires so good...James |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
It takes the heart of a lover to know the soul of another. Your talented words are velvet to the mind, Jeff |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you make it easy to believe again |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
simply stunning...and one of your (all time) best. Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Karen, for your very vibrating reply! Yes, I have it, in my heart. Thank you very much, dear James, your romantic nature knows about these feelings, it reflects in your own poems. Dear Jeff, that is a very lovely reply, thank you. Believe, believe, dear Michele! And give us a poetic rendering of your beliefs . Thank you so much.Eriiiiiiiiiiic! Dear Eric, I always jump in joy when I see you here, because you are very much missed. Thank you for telling me you enjoyed it! Post some of your new creations? Love to all, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhhh....now I see why Jaime replied on his own the way he did. Well done, my friend.  |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
`Splashing particles of pink onto my cheeks` - Oh, how I wish I had written that line! Excellent use of collocations. |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
well you know I am a fan and this is another wonderful reason why. gold star from me...your never a let down. always a wonderful read, image and sound |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
well you know I am a fan and this is another wonderful reason why. gold star from me...your never a let down. always a wonderful read, image and sound (I mean when I read it out) lol. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Oh, this is so replete with unbridled passion, and so artfully expressed; I am almost without words---beauty enfolded in beauty. This is magnificence in verse well wrought! Thanks for a great poem, dear Margherita -- Art |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear, dear Lady and I do mean Lady. Only a person with a loving heart could have so much love for others. You are special. Love 'un stuff Billie C. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Show me how to balance on the crests fearlessly and blissfully as if we were child stars in a fairy tale." you write, I feel. this is delightful Margherita. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
I always unable to describ words of the thank especially for people which are characterize by tender Without Borders . the words of thank alwayes be extremely difficult when formulating. thanks my dear friend love Nourzihane |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ahhhh...to balance thus on waves of love sounds effortless as written in this amazing poem. It makes me want to fly. Happy spring to you, Margherita!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is really wonderful poetic reasoning. The mind shift of a different approach done with such elegance and purity. You're still writing wonderful mind scenes my dear! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am so pleased by the presence on this thread of old and new Poet friends with such heart warming comments. Thank you all, dear ones. Love, Margherita |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Hi Margherita. long time since i've been on to read. Nice to see you still gracing everyone with your wonderfully written words. You make me hold on to a pebble of hope that true love might still be found. Gumpy |
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