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Open Poetry #46

gossamer hearts

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-03-05 03:48 PM

     gossamer hearts

clear Winter evening…

fresh moon gliding
this lake out of time
(midnight lantern in
   a cosmic dream)
bare trees dancing
the river of wind
half-billion year secrets
in these ancient stones
transient travelers
on eternity’s seas...

what shall we presume
   to truly ‘know’ ?

            --- b. e. adams (3/5/2010)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2010-03-05 04:11 PM

Good question, Bruce. Excellent poem.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2010-03-05 09:56 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

I remember midnight lanterns on Eagles Mere during the summer.

Nice work.

Bobby

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-03-05 10:21 PM

Oh Bruce! This is certainly one of your best!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2010-03-06 01:35 AM

Bruce,

I don't know much about much - there is so much greater than the limited knowledge I have. But, I do know beauty when I read it.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-03-07 08:58 AM

This longing for cognizance is everpresent in a sensitive heart and your poetic skills rendered it wonderfully, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

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