Open Poetry #46 |
Little Daffodil Song |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, little daffodil You’re prettier than a rose Such joy you bring to me Despite offending my nose - Alison |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
lol Yo Alison...your poems smell like roses to me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made me chuckle... I'm soooooo looking forward to Spring!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Yes! Sunshine in a cup and saucer. Lovely. Then come the rhodys...and then the dandelions, which make my neighbor happy. He comes down and roots them out of my back yard for the greens in summer and that makes me happy! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Daffodils don't smell bad. Maybe you're smelling ol' Toerag! He's not there in your presence? Yes he is, if only in scent. (heh - ol' Toerag is acting kinda shy lately. This oughta flush that rascal out of hiding.) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I'm still waiting for you picture to reapear dear one? How can we read about gardens without the prettiest bloom on the page? These words smelled gorgeous! Richard |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ever want to grab my attention? *S* Just mention daffodils. *S* Thanks for the smiles... and the anticipation. *S* |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I like this. It's cute. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
good one ! MUCH applause!! it made me think of Gertrude Stein and the 'law of identity'; etc: "a rose is a rose is a rose" [and a nose is a nose is a nose I suppose I suppose I suppose!] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Alison that is so very cute. I loved it and you. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, you guys rock! Jerry, Karilea, Karen, LngJhn, Richard, Ruth, Paul, Bruce & Lindsay - how special you all are to me. I wrote this while brushing my teeth this morning - and that Balladeer! What was he doing in my bathroom? I heard him whispering - make it work, Alison. Thought he was Tim Gunn - but, thank God, he was not. You all make me smile! A |
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