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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2010-02-26 01:44 PM

Whisper Thin Wind

Between midnight and dawn
Translucent dreams hover on ice blue landscapes
A gathering of spirits there, halt the forward motion of time
Moments hold the dust of day into remnant of exhale
All is quiet, all is still
All is quiet, all is still
Drawn up in sweep of golden flood, waiting for cue
Here I, the night owl, observant
Wanderer in the midst of moist hum, moist sigh
Impressionable thought waves on the hour
Between midnight and dawn
All is quiet, all is still
But for a whisper thin wind
That leaves hollow a yearning not yet given voice

Copyright Kkh 2/24/10

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2010-02-26 05:22 PM

I like those time-halting spirits ...

and the ending of this 'write' is particularly fine!:

"All is quiet, all is still
  But for a whisper thin wind
  That leaves hollow a yearning not yet
  given voice"

applause for this 'penning' ...

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2010-02-27 12:00 PM

"Here I, the night owl, observant
Wanderer in the midst of moist hum, moist sigh
Impressionable thought waves on the hour
Between midnight and dawn"

mystical and mysterious TD
and magnificent

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

3 posted 2010-02-27 01:08 AM

A beautiful, haunting write TD. I always read you and always enjoy myself everytime.

Zeitgeist.

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2010-02-27 10:57 AM

This poem is a diamond, and not a diamond in the rough, but exquisitely cut! Superb! ---Art

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2010-03-06 02:53 AM

This is simply beautiful, Diamond.
ida

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

6 posted 2010-03-06 06:20 AM

The lovely images in your poem really brightened my day!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2010-03-06 07:51 AM

incredible !!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2010-03-06 10:47 AM

Your touch is as silken as always, Kathleen.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2010-03-07 10:05 AM

I really feel this, dear Kathleen! A write of superior beauty!

Love,
Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2010-03-07 10:20 AM

Kathleen, this was just so beautiful!

I absolutely loved it!
Richard

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2010-03-09 09:57 PM

ahhh, my friend. . .simply loved it!!

j.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2010-03-14 10:15 AM

simply beaudacious.........beautiful
words Kath...you be thugh...??

8 years

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

13 posted 2010-03-14 10:05 PM

This is every thing a beautiful poem should be. Loved it thank you.

Billie C.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

14 posted 2010-03-19 04:36 PM

"Moments hold the dust of day into remnant of exhale
All is quiet, all is still
All is quiet, all is still
Drawn up in sweep of golden flood, waiting for cue
Here I, the night owl, observant
Wanderer in the midst of moist hum, moist sigh"

You add such a beautiful tone of cinematic color to your writings.
Truly beautiful…

Really love this write!!

JL

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