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Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-02-25 07:31 AM

Big, Big Love

She has more chins than
A Chinese phone book.
When she waves goodbye, It never wants to stop.
When she kisses me, I know a love like no other.

Her seat is broken down in her car.
She takes along a water bottle
to go get the mail.
Her smile is so warm,
I save money on my heating bill
whenever she comes over,
(the grocery bill goes up)

I love her laugh when she can’t get off the sofa.

I love the look in her eyes
when I tell her I don’t deserve to
be as happy as I am when she is with me.

We have a big, big love.

Zeitgeist

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-02-25 05:29 PM

Oh, that's perfect! And rest assured that you fully deserve it! Remember how important thoughts are ... if you think you don't deserve it it will desert you ... so change your way of thinking and just be grateful.

Very lovely poem!

Love,
Margherita

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2010-03-01 07:27 AM

Thank you M. for your reply and solid advice, I am grateful, every day.

Z.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-03-05 11:38 PM

This delighted me like few poems do. I love, love, love it. I am off to read more of your poems.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2010-03-06 04:57 PM

Yes.

This is good.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2010-03-06 07:27 PM

She sounds like a lovely lady Zeitgeist
and I loved your turn of phrase,

'more chins than a chinese telephone book'
You have a great sense of humour my friend.
Take care.

Lindsay

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

6 posted 2010-03-06 10:30 PM

Allison, for you to say you loved one of my poems, is very kind. thank you for reading.

Z.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

7 posted 2010-03-06 10:31 PM

Hey metal man. thanks again for your reply. I always appreciate when you take the time to read anything I write.

Z.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

8 posted 2010-03-06 10:33 PM

Thanks Lindsay. I was trying to mix a little humor with this tribute. Glad you liked it.

Z.

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