Open Poetry #46 |
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Dreams of Cinderella |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA ![]() |
Dreams of Cinderella There was a time I dreamed about The places I would go. The things I would accomplish- And the people I would know... I dreamed of Cinderella- How I’d sweep her off her feet. The future found this dreamy knight Out sleeping on the street. I pictured me, Sir Lancelot... Out striving for the right. It seems that others always saw- Me, as the Norman knight. My motives oft misunderstood- My character besmirched... I’ve never seen, that perfect queen, No matter where I searched. And now life’s shadows lengthen, And my strength is fading fast. I try to live each moment now, As though it were my last. I still dream of Cinderella- And I long to hold her still... As long as I’ve a bresth of life- I guess I always will. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
John, I think that your dreams are one of the things that has made you one of my favorite poets. Keep dreaming, please. Alison |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
To carry on hoping inspite of the odds or the circumstances is most noble. While I find this piece bitter sweet it`s romanticism overshadows that aspect. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Cinderella was a dreamer, and so very unassuming. I guess it must have been prerequisite royal grooming and I read her story often, beguiled as a child, To think she became queen on whom a kingdom smiled. Now I'm old, and stories gold, are simply infant laughter; Envision still a world more bright and Happy Ever After. It comes in small things, ordinary everyday kindnesses and hope. There are Cinderellas and handsome princes still out there, but somehow it's become a Barbie doll world where some women will never fit. I hope you find your princess. ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
John, "that perfect queen "... they don't exist~~ Nothing is perfect in this world, you have to settle for contentment ( which isn't all that bad) ![]() M |
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