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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-02-23 05:07 PM

        Cusp of Spring

Silent sunset shadows
slip in traceless wander
toward an enigmatic moon
   rising
to caress these ancient
stones and endless hills
in a cloak of soft,
silver-evening afterglow.
As a last Winter hare
guards the pathway into
   Spring,
what spirits and dreams
may walk with midnight clarity
in such a place as this...
mellifluous and profound?

          --- b. e. adams (2/23/2010)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2010-02-23 10:35 PM

Nodding...

I dreamt of my Dad.

He told me it was time to start zinnias, and obviously, it's NOT.

Then I saw a seedling grow, and blossom--

I woke up laughing and decided I'll not aruge with the "dead".

gimmee big hugzzzzzz

((((((((((bruce)))))))))))

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-02-25 05:50 PM

Your spirit wanders in deep consciousness through these magnificent sceneries and you "report" to us with mastery.

Just wonderful.

Love,
Margherita

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2010-02-25 05:57 PM

so very lovely....reading this makes me think of spring....the colors are beautiful...

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2010-02-25 09:05 PM

Ah, the poem in itself is mellifluous, and profound! I am taken out of body into this place where beauty and mystery abounds. A very moving poem, Sir! ---Art

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2010-02-25 11:10 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

The words work well in this winter poem.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2010-02-26 10:37 AM

hello Bruce, your poem is penetrating and has a twinkling beauty, a strange serenity that transported me as a reader...I enjoyed very much my read.

regards

yann

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