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Open Poetry #46

drawing

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2010-02-23 09:34 AM

I was lying on the
dusty floor, breathing
dust, air, and silences.
My left hand holding up
my body, while my right
draw a bunny
and a completed bird.
I looked at my
picture, thinking
it needs something
but couldn't think
of a thing.
Within a second my hand
with a mind of it's
own, took hold of
the pencil and drew
lines and scribbles
across the picture. It went
through the eyes,
slashed through the
bird's wings
turning it all into
the Dark. It coiled
around their necks like a snake.
Going to the right, left,
up and down, until my hand
went numb. I looked at
the picture that harbored
a dark presence with
evil, pain, and gloomy
eyes.
Baring fangs and claws that
engulfed the picture. As I lay
on a dusty wooden floor,
breathing,
dust, air, and
my tearful cries
as I stare within
myself.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-02-23 02:39 PM

I would definitely cut out the dill pickles and peanut butter sandwiches before bed!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2010-05-31 07:46 PM

Intense...

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