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i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

0 posted 2010-02-21 11:52 PM

You.
I made you, crafted you
molded you every night in my dreams
I turned you in to who you are to me
and made you pefect in my eyes and thoughts.
You.
I gave you life, made you breathe
made you exists
everyday in my fantasies
It was I,
who made you without flaws in my vision.

And now that Im standing here
face to face with you
for the first time
for such a long time
I realize,
That you're not real.

because the "you"
who dwells inside my head
was mine.
and "you"
right in front of me
belongs to someone else.

Yes now,
that we are here
standing face to face
for the first time
and the last time
I know..
I can only love you..

In my dreams.

"it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince)

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2010-02-22 01:05 AM

SO often this is too true! good write,latearrival

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

2 posted 2010-02-22 11:27 AM

I really loved this. A lot. Beautifully written.

If I don't say it...who will?

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

3 posted 2010-02-22 03:06 PM

I love the insight in thise poem. I am liking our work patch.

Zeitgeist

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-02-23 11:30 AM

kewl stuff patch!!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2010-02-23 01:05 PM

Yo dear Patch,

And that's the way it is so often.

Love Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2010-02-25 02:41 AM

You.
I made you, crafted you
molded you every night in my dreams
That was a poem all by it's little old self.

I liked that part ze mostest.

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

7 posted 2010-03-06 08:59 PM

thanks for the comment..

sometimes we tend to dream too much of the person we love that we end up loving them for who they are in our dreams.. and in reality, we end up hurting...

"it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince)

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