Open Poetry #46 |
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moving on |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
moving on When night befalls this barren, vexing Winter world which has taken everything, and the heart is but an empty vessel brim-full of shadows and starlight, take comfort in transcendent dreams of timeless love and Spring's renewal, ever-rippling on the evening breezeā¦ for hope and life move on. --- b. e. adams (2/21/2010) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
One thing we can not stop and that is the beginning of a new day. How we chose to see it and move to it's warmth or chill is up to us. Enjoyed your post. latearrival |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Sound, and sense, and beauty, enfolded into a magnificent poem! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - yes indeed, life moves on for sure, and no stopping it... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wise and beautiful, Bruce. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I always open your work looking for perfection Bruce and I always find it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nothing wrong with moving on, nothing at all beautiful write |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I see pictures in your words every time. Your friend, Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Time always moves, and life and hope always move with it. This is a wise poem. Bobby |
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