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Open Poetry #46

Transitorily Yours . . .

gilead
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since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

0 posted 2010-01-07 12:54 PM

The clouds
Have their moment,
Fleeting, beautiful,
But not here to stay.

I, too, am beautiful,
In my own brief day---
A bright plume drifting,
And floating away . . .

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2010-01-07 12:58 PM

. . . just a little thought that occurred to me, as I watched puffs of cumulus, passing and vanishing into the wondrous blue.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2010-01-07 02:08 AM

Hello Art, this is delicious, I totally share this thoughtful glance on beauty and passing clouds.

great work

yann

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

3 posted 2010-01-07 12:50 PM

Beauty can be a state of mind, yann, as I tried to reflect in the little poem. Thanks for the kind comment.

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

4 posted 2010-01-07 07:30 PM

cloud watching is one of my favourite pastimes..not much to watch here though except snow at present..looking forward to blue skies again soon after reading your lovely calming poem.

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