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Open Poetry #46
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Zeigeist
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0 posted 2010-02-18 12:37 PM


Lover

She has a clever smile.
In a crowded room,
it reminds me of our passions,
that are ours alone to keep.
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1 posted 2010-02-18 09:44 AM

I got one of those smiles too
Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2010-02-18 10:18 AM

I like this.

The brevity that says so much in such a smile.
Good job Z.
Zeigeist
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3 posted 2010-02-19 06:39 PM

Oh yes.  those smiles that secrets just slowly leak out of. Not enough to notice unless your looking for it. lol

thanks for the reply lady.
Zeigeist
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4 posted 2010-02-19 06:40 PM

thanks Guy,

for your kind words.

Zeitgeist.
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