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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-02-16 07:05 PM

Face to Face

She was one of
the most beautiful women
I had ever seen,
face to face,
and although beauty
is not the end all,
at times it is the beginning,
the open door that
is stepped through
in anticipation,
wondering if the inside
is as special as the outside,
wondering if the view
that the eyes partake of
and the thoughts and actions
that follow
will lead to pain or pleasure,
satisfaction or disappointment,
acceptance or rejections.
What else is new?

JamesLee
12February
2010

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-02-16 07:30 PM

Lovely ponderings, dear James, you will certainly soon discover the beauty of the inside, it must be there, otherwise you would not even have stopped to look.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-02-16 11:41 PM

Oh yes Margherita, the personality is a very stong attraction or distraction...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2010-02-17 11:26 PM

"and although beauty
is not the end all,
at times it is the beginning,"

magnificent lines James

Karleygirl
Junior Member

since 2010-08-05

Posts 20

4 posted 2010-12-24 02:25 AM

This is just another AMAZING peom you wrote!!! Your really good at writing these peoms and i'm looking forward to your next one

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-24 03:05 AM

"wondering if the inside
is as special as the outside"

Very well done piece James.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

6 posted 2010-12-24 07:14 AM

Never know until we take that step, though, do we, James? Classic.

. . . and the raven said, )/(%!~@~#&$ . . .

Prats
Member

since 2010-12-16

Posts 74

7 posted 2010-12-24 08:41 AM

nicely written...

i liked it...

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

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