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Open Poetry #46

In Your Eyes

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2010-02-16 07:42 AM

A day without you
are just minutes
that are homeless.

Or a sun that paints
darkness
on trees in the windfalls,
swaying with season
without any reason,
reaching up high
to scratch eyes,
out of heaven.

What is duration,
but allotment of interval
this time, it goes on,
without nod nor permission,
ungracious
in its arrogance
benevolent like moment,
it steals our allowance
of while and rapture.

The beginning, a threshold
that drank from the outcome
the swift of the swallows
this maiden conception,
a shrill made of silence
that leapt from the inkling,
sirens seductress
of supple coition.

My words are the breaths
that I take when your absent
this blood of a river
that flows from our past,
your touch is an aura
that lightens the blindness
within every memory
my shadow has cast.

I hope that one day
I can stop writing wishes
and finally live in
a love poem with you.
whenever I leave you
in heart I start dying.

My home is the heaven,
I see in your eyes

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-02-16 07:33 PM

Oh, this is so beautifully romantic, dear Richy!

A joy to read and follow your emotions.

Love,
Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2010-02-16 08:51 PM

Thank you my dear.
What would I do without you?!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-02-16 11:42 PM

Nice...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2010-02-17 10:28 AM

aww Richy! This is so touching!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2010-02-19 02:44 AM

James - Thanks

Thank you so much Dixie, always an honor to read from you!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2010-03-22 04:21 PM

I hope that one day
I can stop writing wishes
and finally live in
a love poem with you.

I think a lot of us know those wishes... you've written them so wonderfully!!

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