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Feel So Alive
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Feel So Alive |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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All things in Nature speak Of balance and harmony Things all who strive to seek Say how they want it to be Nothing is as true As the moon in the nighttime sky Nothing quite as pure As the look in your eyes I can’t escape what makes me so tragic I alone, know what that thing is Some sort of elemental magic, To pretend this is where I always live Never have I felt every nerve on fire Never have I ever felt so alive Cool wind blowing through my hair Moonlight shining upon my face How much do I want to stay there In that dark and lonely place Alone, you and I forever are Never let the feelings restrain Down comes the bright and eternal stars Washing us clean with cool, sweet rain All things in Nature conspire To not release me, just yet; Knowing full well how inspired, I am at being so wet Never have I felt every nerve on fire Never have I ever felt so alive |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
you match words and title very well. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your words bring credence to that first gush of love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfection in this rhyme scheme! wonderful job! |
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