Open Poetry #46 |
Bones and Parents |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
The Moms and Dads in the hood don’t want their kids hanging out with little Bones. They know how Bones spends his nights, and what he does to earn some bread. Moms tell there kids to stay away from Bones, tell them Bones is no damn good at all. Dads, well they don’t mention Bones. They pretend they don’t even know there’s a kid named Bones living in the hood. They’re afraid of guilt by association, any association at all. Bones is the most popular kid in the hood for blocks around. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very instructive and well written, an enjoyable poem. regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Eloquent yes, dear Bobby. Poverty may impose painful choices. Though the Moms didn't want their kids to be close to Bones, the hood itself adopted him in a way. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm very happy that the poem worked for you, and that you found it instructive. As the last two lines note, Bones was very popular with the other kids because their parents wanted them to avoid Bones. I think that's the way it always is. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, What you say is true. The hood did adopt Bones, and he was very popular with the other children. I will tell you this. The exclusionary attitude of the parents broke Bones heart at the time. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I don't doubt that, dear Bobby! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For your understanding and kind hug. Love Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Nothing is ever as attractive as the forbidden. *S* But... I'm glad Bones has the friends, regardless of why they're there. *S* |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, What you say is true. Yes, Bones friends mean a lot to him. They are just like family. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - you sure do have some tales to tell about Bones... Interesting though... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Bones gets around, and that's for sure. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This had an interesting twist to it. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, I'm glad you found it interesting. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm just glad Bones had friends. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Bones and I are also glad he had friends. Love Bobby |
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