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Adrenaline. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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You left the room and I noticed my heart beating sand and stone skinned drums. My breath felt full of air, my air felt full of oxygen, and you sent the whole lot whistling over glass bottle mouths. The chemicals in my body pretended I was falling from the sky and I allowed them that lie because it felt good to be alive again. ____________________________________ Leaf, Overturned. (series.) Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you. rock. my. socks.  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Wow. Thanks.  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Paul, I am glad that you are here. I have missed reading your poetry. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Alaboo, dearest Alaboo, thank you. You're a sweetheart. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I love the line `my breath felt full of air and my air felt full of oxygen. Nice. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Most Excellent!  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
viking_metal - you dig deep, and it comes out well in your words. Nice write... BC |
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