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Carve On
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Carve On |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Carve On before the word before the page there reached across the word of sage from the heart from within the chest mankind gave to us his best Carve On ~*~ came the scribe of man's tribe in voice of thunder made man wonder carried the tales of life's history shared with all His story Carve On ~*~ deep within my soul there reigns a calling deep in this domain that perhaps one day beyond the pall there shall ring within the call to Carve On Carve on reflections carve on the write carve your soul deep into the night wend your words and mighty thought leave behind memory so that we're taught to carve on carve on some bone some rock, then hone into a book a treasured tome leave your mark, leave it clear carve on into the heart to be held so dear Carve On… ~*~ then carve us all a circle to bring us all herein where we see the loving compassion and caring carve the curve of living carve the warmth of friend Carve On and in your writings see this circle of homecoming Carve On ~*~ (c) 12.31.00 |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine-you challenge, you inspire, you sow seeds of a deeper sanity... love you Lori |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Leave it to you to carve rings around the sun. Love the array of emotions and yes, I see so much color in your poetry. Happy New Year to you, good poetess!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..when you write like this it makes me crave more..."crave on" muy cool stuff ms |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
and we do carve on ... don't we  enjoyed this one |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Most of us carve in the sand and is washed asunder with the tide. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Magic Mantra ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karilea What a neat way to relanguage progressive art. Loved the progressive way you presented this write. My my girl you're a wonder sometimes. That last verse is just as warm and inviting as a fireside talk with a bottle of good wine. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call and kinda driftin away from it all |
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