Open Poetry #46 |
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Never What They Seem |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
Relationships are victims of my imagination, so perfect in thought, so imperfect in reality, they're never what they seem. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep, they are perfect in thought. Nope, they never are quite what they seem. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
relationships need structure, supplied by more than oneself or they may take a serious tumble ![]() short but weaved with much thought ~ enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
relationships are very difficult...in reality, when people are not able to live up to our expectations of what we think a relationship should be, it sets us and them up to fail...we all think and believe differently...so in theory..what it's about, is understanding, just b/c someone thinks and feels differently then we do, doesn't make them wrong and us right or visa versa... very thought provoking write |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I really think relationships are best when you have a real respect for each other.Can't be one way.Find some one you can respect and who respects you. Everythings else is second. JMO latearrival |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know what you mean. However, I think they're the best of what you make of them. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The feelings you write of are so disappointing, but the promise of love is hard to let go of. Nicely said and done~ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Relationships, like Shrek and onions, have many layers. Beautiful or ugly on the surface, it is the foundation that decides their longevity. You said much in so few words. Nice work. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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