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Winter Wind |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Comfortable in the sage sweater we wove a tapestry of green among the whispering hills a vintage passion all our own. Given time and our existence separating the distance between us we quietly tiptoed from the comforts of our chateau pouring sand through an hour class lost in the moment waiting for no one. Crossing the drawbridge without a care to the water rising an impressionist love affair laid bare in the evocative sunlight. Your lips like sable in a perfect storm all encompassing in the afterglow. Like violet jewels I wear you with the same passion daring charm and endless love holding you close. Gentle as the breeze blowing in the winter wind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...Love can do that, and more. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh my gumbo. If I am anything poetically it's a sometimes lucky amateur who blusters out occasional good lines. I have comprehension issues, which I do not often confess. But for some strange reason in a moment of clarity I actually understood each word in this piece and they weaved together so well for me and it was like a spell being chanted. The sing-song sanity with which this was penned simply amazes me, and I feel profoundly grateful, and truly awed. I know I am in the company of many great and incredible poets when I can come in here, but you have provided sound proof to my mental miasma that I'm not just being polite. Thank you for sharing! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Absolutely fantastic presentation, Blues. There is so much here, all of it in fact, that I relate to and hearken back to hot sultry days in southern Arkansas and my very first love and our escape from the world in the midst of a stand of pine trees, a blanket and us. Those precious days have never left me, and I have a feeling they will be the last viable thoughts I will have. Your beautiful poem, although there were hints of storms on the horizon, sent me back there tonight. Thank you. To mimic is a form of praise unless you have no thoughts of your own |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm liking this...and I haven't felt a gentle breeze in the wintertime for some years...not since I last visited Houston... but I can relate! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most fine and romantic 'write' !! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful! Bluesy, how do you do it. A `sweater of sage-green grasses, woven by the wind`...? (paraphrased)...that is divine! Very inspired, I am impressed, and I so enjoyed this whole poem.  A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue..a woman loving love is always poetic..needless to say there are no weeds in this lawn baby..way cool |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all for your kindness and encouraging words. As I've said before, it's an honor sharing these blue pages with you. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love how you weave the lines and tapestry of love throughout the poem, and there is no fire quite like the fire of amethyst...the crocuses bursting snow in winter, and the winter wind definitely looses its sting. Who could not used this kind of spring in the days of a cold December? Gorgeousness!  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
winter wind seems so much more inviting from your perspective beautiful |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to tell you that you write a beautifully expressed poem of romance and love but you also have this sensuous delivery that tops it off with passionate dressing!! That's my story and it's the truth! I'm sticking to it. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I wear you with the same passion daring charm and endless love holding you close." So touching and sweet! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very much appreciate your gracious replies. Thank you all for reading me. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very beautifully expressed, Blues! Owl |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
love your poetry |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, it is so good to read you again. I felt that gentle breeze.... Hugs, Ethel |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have always enjoyed your smile and your words.I think you out did yourself with this one. Hoping it is a true reflection of your life today. latearrival |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"pouring sand through an hour class lost in the moment waiting for no one." Beautiful writing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Happy New Year Everyone!! Thanks so much for stopping by, you're all just so nice to me. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is beyond beautiful, dear Lori! An absolute keeper! Love and Happy New Year! Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you sweet lady!! Happy New Year to you, Margherita~ |
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