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Time, Lords... on a second’s urge... (no, it couldn’t wait)
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Time, Lords... on a second’s urge... (no, it couldn’t wait) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Time, Lords….on a second’s urge…[no, it couldn’t wait] One would trust that our tick, tick, tick would remain of itself, quick and slick, but wait they say, for just one second… should we hold our breath? or make a wish? seize someone and seal a kiss? or trust on faith of mustard seeds… or a hold upon my heart? For in one thousand years, [or…eight million, seven hundred sixty thousand hours….] or about that, and so, they say, an hour would so slowly grow in the whim and roam of earth’s rotation, simply by a second’s urge and they think it important, to all nations…to hold from whim, our need to splurge into the new year…into the new… into all like a teacup’s brew… [Help me, Alice, find the White Rabbit… someone’s late, for tea]  ~*~ One would think that on a whimsy’s must would not lead one on to such a trust as to adhere to another than the sound of wind… and yet, they make us think, for a moment, and yet again… on a second’s urge… ~*~ so in this encapsulated tried and tied, trite but true moment, I will take an instant captured, a second’s urge to sigh… and hold all that is right on a second’s splurge, before I hide my cry… even before I can wish on a second’s just held urge… Happy New Year to all of Passions, and I squeak in, just before the forthcoming surge…. ~*~ I do want to thank all of you for seeing so many through 2010... and for giving such hope to all for the new of 2011. Always... Sunshine orig. 12-28-05 [This message has been edited by Ron (12-29-2010 05:58 AM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ahhh... Beautiful as ever.  ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Pure Sunshine! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Exiting the old year in style and form as we creep slowly toward the new kid on the block. Wonder how many innocent people will be blown to bits by bombs strapped to idiots in the coming year? Not trying to be negative, but . . . To mimic is a form of praise unless you have no thoughts of your own |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
... and a Happy New Year to you as well. Peace m'Lady. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Happy New Year special lady! 2011 will be filled with occasions for you to rise to and shine! Much love, Lori |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well since the street I party on has been bought out by the Chinese...guess we will do New Years on Feb 3rd this year...should work out good, the DUI traps will be down by then? enjoyed your words ms |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Such a good write, Karilea! May your new year bring peace, health, and happiness. Helen |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so wonderful, so full of hope and love and friendship, and a bit of whimsy that makes for perfect poetry. May the New Year bless you and yours. Thank you always for sharing your warm rays. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...Now or then or some time to be, a whimsy must do what a whimsy does, just because.  |
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