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Open Poetry #46
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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2010-02-08 02:23 AM

Faith
Belief
Confidence

Give and take
and take
and take
and take

Demolish
Break
Crush

Finished
Gambled away

If trust is a greater compliment than love
then distrust is a grave insult.

That is 'something to sneeze at'

so how to get it back?
when I have done nothing wrong.

Persistent
Committed
Devoted

To finding a treatment for this burn
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1 posted 2010-02-08 12:21 PM

Time.  Just time.  Nicely done.
tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2010-02-11 07:54 PM

Thanks!
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