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Open Poetry #46

Teach Me to Love

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

0 posted 2010-02-07 06:24 PM

~Teach Me to Love~

Teach me to love
Teach me to smile
Your shining eyes
Can light endless miles
Those flirtatious looks
Can make my hear soar
I can’t stop dreaming
With each dream I want you more
Just stop your teasing!
No! Wait! …Don’t quit
My heads doing cartwheels
From your beauty and wit
I don’t know what I want
Let’s just stay like this
Forbidden love
Forbidden dreams
Of
Your
Soft kiss

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-02-07 07:15 PM

Yo Jaki H,

It looks like you already know about love.

Love cannot be taught.

Bobby

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2010-02-07 10:43 PM

aah true... i should have explained. its a bit awkward, but ive kind of fallen for a teacher. hence the teach part lol. and yes your right you cant be taught how to love

thanks for the feedback!
-jaki h

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-02-09 06:17 PM

Nice...James

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2010-02-09 09:20 PM

Love the write but just wish you wouldnt have repeated the word dream... otherwise I enjoyed it!

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

5 posted 2010-02-10 03:05 PM

oh my gosh thank you for pointing that out!
You're right i will definately change the second dream part
thank you!

-Jaki H

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2010-02-14 05:57 PM

Great write!!

JL

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