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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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0 posted 2010-12-21 10:16 PM



Take as much of me as you want,
Give me as much of you as you can,
We will merge the one with the other,
And make a whole from the pieces.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

© Copyright 2010 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2010-12-21 10:31 PM


I just love this
Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-21 10:32 PM


Thanks, Lori / I just poured my one glass of vino for the day / Tastes good

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2010-12-21 10:42 PM


My friend...

I'm writing a specific article for a magazine,
and this poem reflects the warmth of it.

Merry Christmas, Jerry.


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
4 posted 2010-12-21 10:48 PM


Good luck with the article, Sunshine. When it's finished are you going to let us know where to go to read it?

Thank you for your kind words.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
5 posted 2010-12-22 12:29 PM


Its a wonderful thing- when two become one. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Bastet
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6 posted 2010-12-22 12:37 PM


I really like the idea of each of us being pieces and that we need each other to make a whole. So true!
JerryPat
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Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
7 posted 2010-12-22 07:28 AM


Thanks, Trina. Yes, there is no feeling like that oneness feeling. Good to see you on Facebook also, and thanks for the request.

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Appreciate you nice comment on my poem, Bastet,

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Sunshine
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8 posted 2010-12-22 08:01 AM


I sure will, Jerry. This is the link that you can follow for this year's past articles...It's been such fun following this little segment of one of my many dreams.  

Sunshine's "Sunflower Living"  Articles


JerryPat
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Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
9 posted 2010-12-22 08:39 AM


Thanks, Sunshine. Me being new here I wasn't aware of this link. Appreciate it.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

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