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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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Trapped inside these four walls Painted black, concealing darkness Scratching from inside trying to get out Screaming, crying, I want to be free Overwhelmed feeling inside my skin Anxiety unbearable, more shadows overtake The only being of my empty soul Now taken away, Nowhere to be found |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There you two go writing dark poetic lines again. I'll come down there and take you both away from it all.  If you click on the pic it's easy to tell I was just joking....LOL! I love many forms of the dark too. My favorite type of song writing is the blues. Keep up the good work. Eric [This message has been edited by ethome (12-17-2010 08:20 PM).] |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Keep it up. Love the darkness of the poetry. Edgar Allen Poe is a well know and revered name. Dark is good. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You do dark well and I'm sure you are both capable of lighter work if you choose. Don't cave to the pressure of worrisome blues singers  |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
Oh I know I can write lighter poetry. i just enjoy writing darker poetry because it lifts a lot of stress off my shoulders for a short period of time. It's like a high in a good way |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
i like ur dark poetry... Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!! |
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