Open Poetry #46 |
Little things in life |
Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
Have u ever wondered wen it has rained n thundered a trifle thing said by someone can ruin ur day or make it fun? Has d realization ever occurred when a comment got u deterred One genuine smile, a heartfelt hug Is wat it takes to make things work? even though these things ain’t in d center dey can make things worse or better... The little things... Yeah, these little things do matter Did d truth ever strike u really in ur happy moments of victory after achieving heights unbelievable wat matters most is d struggle? Did u ever think dis way in d darkest of ur day, decide 2 give it another try n ask yourself why can’t I? Just one single spark can light d darkest of dark one pebble in d ocean can set d water in motion... These things might seem little, but they make the middle... These little things make d big thing seem worth what they r seeming... Yeah, these little things do matter... Prats!!! :D |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. Please, check your email for a Very Special Message! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ah, yes the little things are not so little when we are the recipient. When once you are on the recivinged, you will always give back. Thanks for this reminder. |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Welcome. I really liked that one. Your free form style is nice, and nice conceptual. Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
Thank you for ur replies everyone... I really appreciate that... Prats!!! :D |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
I do believe that simple things really matter. Because even a simple misunderstanding could ruin everything... Prats!!! :D |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Welcome to Pip! You speak the truth. This is lovely. Love and joy. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good reasoning here.. "Did u ever think dis way in d darkest of ur day, decide 2 give it another try n ask yourself why can’t I?" Very nice thoughts in this poem. Welcome to Passions I know you'll enjoy your stay. Eric |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
thnx 4 ur comments margherita and ethome... i m really enjoying here... Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!! |
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