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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I will always see you in my mind looking down as if you were shy but your lipstick said otherwise and I did listen to your smile you had been there before I arrived and sprinkled your perfume around in those places I would step back into to catch my thoughts and consider whether you were setting a trap or not and if I should just slowly fall in or boldly run and jump while you watched from the reflection of some friendly window so you could turn around ever so quickly and open your arms wide enough to catch me and ask me directions to somewhere else with the suggested agenda of finding yourself when you knew it was me doing the discovering _______________ daark |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Fantastic musing here, daark. Traps being what they are are, or can be, wonderful experiences, although there are some traps maintained by the black widow and we are devoured even as we are partaking of the lovely treats we find. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JP..thanks guy, yep true stuff about the black widow..this one got away because I am not one to wait in line. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this rendezvous of words DS~ When you write this way....well you know! Ha! So you don't like standing in line? Really? More like getting out of line when it suits you, but I'll hold your place, cause you're special.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue...thanks babe..I will hold you to that (saving a place for me) and I promise to be out of line too...BTW, email me? a friend of yours says hi.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ummmm, you got mail! is this like a trick question? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh babyblue..would I ever do anything like that? (that is a trick question) Thanks babe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great twist of thoughts Daark. I like the title. Some things good or bad are just planned to the limit because the planner is a schemer without even knowing it. Good stuff! Eric |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A slick bit of writing. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wonderfull! Loved it! Kat >^..^< |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks ET ____________________ Andrew, thanks amigo __________________ thanks lady Kat |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Nice writing as usual. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks Earl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You beg the question of being trapped, and no, I don't think a murdercycle guy could ever be trapped in any way... you are far to wary in your listenings... and this is just from an outsider peaking in a window...  One has to love your windows....  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
licking my fingers... ah |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*burp* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks babe. _______________ ms serene...save a finger for me to suck? thanks lady!! |
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