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Open Poetry #46

That's Where I Will Be

Abe
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since 2003-05-28

Posts 694
Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2010-12-15 08:28 AM

That's Where I Will Be

I've traveled many miles
And, many, places, did I see
But, always found, that where I am
Is, that's where I will be.

I can dream of different scenes
And, change, all those things around
But, wherever I may be
Is the place, I'm to be found.

I may be, with other people
But, there's just one, on my mind.
And, hoping that's where I'll be
When, my searching, finds, my find.

12.14.2010

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-12-15 07:01 PM

`When my searching finds my find is a clever line to finish up this well constucted poem.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-12-15 08:38 PM

I very much agree with Earl. I'm glad I found you here with this piece to share. Just remember... no matter where you go, there you are... so be happy with where you're at.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2010-12-15 09:44 PM

Cleverly written. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2010-12-17 01:36 AM

enjoyed. latearrival

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-17 02:10 AM

He he neat turn-a-bouts.

I enjoyed it very much.

Eric

Prats
Member

since 2010-12-16

Posts 74

6 posted 2010-12-18 09:02 AM

nicely written... i enjoyed reading this piece...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

7 posted 2010-12-18 09:47 AM

Cleverly written... I am not even going to make an attempt at that comma code, though.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2010-12-18 03:20 PM

..i much enjoyed your poem, Sir..>>spiros

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