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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-12-14 08:10 AM


  
  
and as she
held on to
those roses
the thorns
pricked from
within


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-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

© Copyright 2010 TrinaMarie73 - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2010-12-14 08:14 AM


This is so good (as per your usual) hit me where I'm living today.
Lori

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-12-14 08:53 AM


Haunting!

Deeply enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2010-12-14 01:11 PM


roses have thorns dear
cultivate them as you will
blood floats to the top

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2010-12-14 01:16 PM


Hi Trina

Unsettled emotional issues. This is very cleverly thought provoking.

Eric

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
5 posted 2010-12-14 08:23 PM


The poem left me feeling sad and unsettled.  Your writing when you wish can have that effect on people
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
6 posted 2010-12-14 11:30 PM


Wow!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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