Open Poetry #46 |
Thorns |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
and as she held on to those roses the thorns pricked from within Image Credit -Trina. You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is so good (as per your usual) hit me where I'm living today. Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Haunting! Deeply enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
roses have thorns dear cultivate them as you will blood floats to the top |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Trina Unsettled emotional issues. This is very cleverly thought provoking. Eric |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The poem left me feeling sad and unsettled. Your writing when you wish can have that effect on people |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Wow! "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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