Open Poetry #46 |
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Fire. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. ![]() |
welcome back, fire let's make the world burn blue and red and Paul. ashes for breakfast lunch dinner. ashes for everyone assure yourself, they're free. just follow the fire get burned or be with me light on fire and change change the way things seem to be. _________________________________ Lame. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Beautifully captured. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet ![]() |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks very much, poet and passing shadow. I didn't like this when I wrote it and posted it, but it's growing on me. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very nice, Paul. I am following the trail of sparks. They light up the night like sparklers or the tips of burning sticks. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Aliboo, my dearest Aliboo, You never fail to post on a poem. That means mounds more than you probably think it does. I love having you. ![]() Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you most kindly. Sometimes I even come back and read again -- even if they are lame! A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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