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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

0 posted 2010-12-13 06:13 PM

Day
opens mourning gray
misty ends to ache
awareness, a dreamer's
chill

Again
I close my eyes
as if, warm and breathing
inner fires seething
I might feel you
still.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-12-13 06:20 PM

Aw the angst is clearly felt.
This is a bittersweet beauty, Lassy.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2010-12-13 09:16 PM

There is a time between sleep and wake, when you can change reality, at least for a moment...you captured it.

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-13 09:48 PM

Ah, for those precious few fraudulent moments we can resurrect old ghosts for a few seconds.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2010-12-13 10:32 PM

A ghostly feel to this one. Just the right touch. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-14 06:34 AM

I like that so much, "Klassy Lassy"......

I'm sorry I left you but I will be back to give you a blood circulating massage.
Don't know what I was thinking.

Have a great day, I enjoyed this. Don't mind me I'm crazy, Mom dropped me on my head when I was young.

Eric

This band's won two grammys for instrumentals. You don't know how that makes me feel as the lead singer!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-12-14 06:58 AM

enjoyed your heartbeats here KL...simple and open and under arrest

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2010-12-14 09:25 AM

Dear Karen, this brought deep emotion, it is very poignant and beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2010-12-15 12:07 PM

Love it!

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

9 posted 2010-12-15 12:21 PM

Blues,

  Thank you.  Bittersweet, yes...that's a very good description when you are missing someone.

Martie, I love your response.  The idea of changing reality is very appealing sometimes.

Jerry, mmm... waking dreams and evanescent wraiths to be sure!  Thank you.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

10 posted 2010-12-15 12:30 PM

Andrew, Peace. What a lovely word when the sound of one's own heartbeats are too loud.

Eric, yeah! what were you thinking leaving me that way?

It couldn't be because I was never ethome.

LOL Thank you for making me laugh.

...and you, Dark, for sure, heartbeats under arrest, errant trouble makers, anyway!. I love that analogy.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

11 posted 2010-12-15 12:43 PM

Margherita,

Thank you, poetess! Your gentle heart shines.

Trina, I'm glad you stopped in!

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

12 posted 2010-12-16 05:50 AM

Damp, chill, dawn, emotions well expressed. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

13 posted 2010-12-16 07:11 AM

Prasad, Thank you!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2010-12-16 10:00 PM

I do so need to introduce you to some
of my own dreams...

but you're on the right link...

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