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Open Poetry #46

A Friend in Need?

irmirt
Junior Member

since 2010-06-09

Posts 18

0 posted 2010-12-11 04:46 PM

A Friend in Need?

Truly time has shown its face;
Our often closest friend.
Who helps our smiles to grow...
And give our dreams no end.

To filter life's all ill made harm
to rest our worries, lay them side;
Although the pain will last it seems;
Forever, hurts can hide.

My dream seems like a cloud;
mid summer's sunny day.
Blown by wind and warmed by sun,
yet, slowly fade away.

Changing moments, changing times;
What more could we desire?
Tomorrow's stage has oft been set;
The days gone by, transpire.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-12-14 01:23 PM

irmirt..cool stuff here..liked the use of transpire..it is often an orphan word.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-12-19 06:33 PM

Enjoyed...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-12-19 10:06 PM

Interesting write irmirt.

Lots of metaphorical backing to make your point and well done!
Time eventually takes it toll on all but it's how we address it that gets us through.

Eric

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