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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2010-12-11 02:08 AM



Sometimes I wonder how God knows
What wind will bring the winter snows
What day will ice the lawn and trees
What prayer will bring me to my knees

He seems to stand beside my bed
And knows my prayers before they’re said
And when I felt a shallow breath
Would be my end, a silent death

He knew I had more lonely nights
To ponder wrongs and relish rights
More days to whittle time away
More seasons left, more debts to pay

More years to live and love and grow
More winter days just watching snow
Sometimes I wonder deep within
If snow will fly tomorrow’s wind

Elizabeth Santos

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1 posted 2010-12-11 03:24 AM


The poetess is back and in fine form. So happy to read you again, Elizabeth!
                               Ida

Margherita
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2 posted 2010-12-11 07:18 AM


quote:
More years to live and love and grow
More winter days just watching snow
Sometimes I wonder deep within
If snow will fly tomorrow’s wind



You wonder so beautifully, dear Elizabeth! Welcome back!

Always a joy to read you!

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-12-11 09:13 AM


The wonder of wondering is that it makes you an innocent child again for those few moments.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Alison
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4 posted 2010-12-11 12:40 PM


This is poetry. I am going to hold it close and savor it.

Love,
Alison

... and save it ...

Martie
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5 posted 2010-12-11 12:43 PM


It's so good to see you back, Liz...with so many questions to wonder about.  
LeeJ
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6 posted 2010-12-13 03:16 PM


Oh Liz, this was gorgeous...
and yes, you have so so many years left

Love to you, and thanks so much for writing and sharing this beauty.

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2010-12-13 08:07 PM


What exquisite ponderings.  I love that our needs are known before we do, feel the beauty of softness falling into awareness, whether it be snowflakes or angel messages.  This is very lovely, Elizabeth.  Be blessed!  
ethome
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8 posted 2010-12-14 06:51 AM


So good to see your wonderful poetic style grace the pages here again Elizabeth.

This a tender write of such thankfulness, I applaude you! Wonderful phrasing and wording.

Eric

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9 posted 2010-12-15 10:59 AM


Reads like a prayer, and so beautifully rendered.

Many blessings to you~


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10 posted 2010-12-15 08:02 PM


I think that the recently installed Mz. Gizmo has recharged and clicked on dear Madame Santo's sonnet switch  

I could sure borrow the fellow standing guard over your bed to help get rid of this sciatica Liz.

Lovely poem and prayer dear friend.

Andrew Scott
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11 posted 2010-12-15 08:26 PM


What would life be without the wonder of it all? Your words speak a powerful truth of being human. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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