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prime rate with chili and tobacco
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prime rate with chili and tobacco |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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firefly cicadas, perhaps as chile peppers if bitten too eagerly, or slowly enough like the strum of drums on evenings when the mind begs fingers to go numb or the more vile ending of violining when gypsies are scolded with ignore by the dead men under their green carpets that can only clutch square sided wheels french bread for those bred more english speaking spanish like protesting catholics changing their latin into louvered views from voyeurs verandaing window confessionals the golf gods club their gulfs from chairs and recite the pledge of allegro allegiance while worshiping green bosom minor misery as mistresses of stone, mistrusting their stones that were rushed to bruise mount rushmore's gaze __________ daark (exercise in reviewing of investment strategies during golf and other religious distractions that occur on alternating sunday afternoons) |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Intersting, D... I must confess I'm glad for your slight explanation at the bottom of your post, as I'd be lost without it... I must be slightly thick?  LolYour way with words is always compelling. Best~ A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms A...just imagine channel roulette...all stuffed in bite sized snipets..thanks ms |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Ah! Ty  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I'm thick also, but you have a definite way with words. Enjoyed. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks JP...the prozac helps on this end..(grin) |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Golf allows no such outside distractions!! Blasphemy!!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deer...sorry about that...please don't behead my bobbleobama..thanks guy! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Richness of that game and the richness of your words go well together. Distractions are a strict no!  in golf. Fine writing, Dark. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Richness of that game and the richness of your words go well together. Distractions are a strict no! in golf. Fine writing, Dark. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks Prasad |
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