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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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You've been locked up with the crazies and the fools for being unrealistic holding onto dreams of love silly mortal you'll never be emancipated until you realize no such thing exists not in my world and I've been locked up with the crazies and the fools deep within my very own asylum. -Trina. "A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal." [This message has been edited by s1nfully_1nn0c3nt (12-06-2010 11:34 PM).] |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt: You've basically answered your own query: "deep within my very own asylum." they only exist if you allow them entrance into your own thoughts and feelings. The "crazies" and "fools" will attempt to deceive you into thinking it is not a worthy goal to seek love--that it will end in sorrow..but it doesn't have to..but by not at least trying to find love--you're defeated before you even begin. wonderful introspective poem! Al |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
nice poem and i enjoyed reading your work |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Trina-your introspective pieces are always unique and thought provoking and a treat to read. LGR |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, yes indeed, Trina, I relate big time. I'm never disappointed when I click on your name. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Flash, Mike, Lori, Jerry - Thanx for looking in  -Trina. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I really love this poem. It reminds me of one of my favorite David Bowie songs `All The Madmen` off the album `The Man Who Sold The World`. The refrain goes `Cause I`d rather stay here - With all the madmen - Then perish with the sadmen running free - Your poem is in good company. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Too many of us give in to internal feelings. We need to get out and get on. love this poem. latearrival |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
your poem is wonderful each and every word of it I can relate to.  |
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