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gdcod3player
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0 posted 2010-12-03 06:14 PM


I want to watch the stars fall down
Your the girl in my dreams
Now let me hold you close tonight
But this wind is so cold
Should we get outta here?
I don't want to call it a night
I want to take you all the way out of here
Let me know if you have time

I don't want to give you up this time
Where did you go?
Let me get the light
Girl i don't want to lose you this time!
I want to feel you next to me at home
Let the stars be shown tonight
I want to know how you feel?
Don't keep everything from me
Don't let me feel alone
I want to love you for the rest of my life
Let me know when you are ready for that day
Your safe when your home please don't let it get away
I'd give you my life
Don't let me go away



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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2010-12-03 07:55 PM


thats very sweet wish a guy would say that to me lol.


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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California
2 posted 2010-12-03 08:25 PM


Thanks lol too bad the girl i wanted to say that to left me exactly a month ago
mikeandrew
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3 posted 2010-12-03 08:43 PM


good work nicely constructed.
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