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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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California

0 posted 2010-11-30 07:22 PM


You left me as a stranger
A person on the other side of this glass
My heart beats to the sight of you
Hey can you see me?
How can i move along?
You were a girl i could love
The years we spent together have been left behind
I wish i could stand with pride
Whats the point if you don't come around anymore

I thought it would be us two forever
That promise was nothing but a prop to get me up on the hill
You knew we would fall
I wish we could mend ourselves back together
You just want to run around out of sight
How can i make you smile with such a heavy frown?
This building we have built together is made of straw
Something that cant stand the harsh winds that sweep through your hair
I want to go on the road with you
How can we go without giving it our all?
Now i'm that stranger you wont call
Just give me a reason to find a lost highway
So i can search for my lost cause
Let me cross the Vally so i can get to your car
Looking through the window staring at my lost love like a dog in the rain
Will she ever see my pain?

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-12-04 08:16 PM


Ouch! Been there, done that. As I'm sure many have. But you write it well. I particularly likes these two lines...
"Just give me a reason to find a lost highway
So i can search for my lost cause"

Good luck in your search. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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