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Where Did We Go
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Where Did We Go |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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Where Did We Go I can see it now, what is no longer there. No love light, no longing. Sometimes I lie awake at night, I am so lonely, even with you here. Where did we go. Long car trips in silence, diners with empty chairs. I just stand and Look out the window for hours. Where did we go, Where did we go. Zeitgeist |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
dear Zeigeist, I't sounds like yyo never left. Bobby |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
To be surrounded and still lonely, It must be hard to fall out of love without even noticing it, until it hits you. "Where did we go" The title and emotions fit. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I relate. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well that sucks! The piece was perfect, but then, there it is... Hope the view changes. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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