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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2010-11-28 12:02 PM



3 churches on the square terreiro de Jesus
And then more discreet Sao Francisco
In a hidden recess of the city which rests its doubts,
Gilded until the sickness of the world,
Until the incomprehension of the saints,
I visit slowly because it is the ultimate purpose
to stare at the saints and feel the faith
As a criticism of those who break
The past of this city with 365 churches.

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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2010-11-29 01:24 AM


"I visit slowly because it is the ultimate purpose
to stare at the saints and feel the faith
As a criticism of those who break". Thought provoking lines.Fine writing here, Yann. Good to read you again.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2010-11-29 04:43 AM


Thanks Parsad, I have been busy since a while and the site don't notify me of replies..I appreciate your supportive comment.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-11-30 12:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
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