Open Poetry #46 |
Just now |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Just now And for no clear reason I said to myself Silently, mentally “I feel good” Which, is unusual Not the talking to myself part That happens often enough It’s the feeling good bit That gives me pause Its been a while Since a sense of well being Or being well Has bubbled up to the fore Or anywhere else Then, just now Gone But, lingering Moon gentle |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Wranx, It's always important when good feelings linger. It should happen often. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's been awhile indeed good to read you again |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I remember when... after months of grief... I startled myself with the sound of my own laughter. Sometimes those "whiles" extend too long... but we sure do appreciate the simplicity of goodness when it returns. And we appreciate your return... it's been too long... but worth waiting for! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am not only glad to see you, but this poem would surely apply to a lot of people, but they don't express it. Hope you moved from that river, I am "still" watching your tides. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I did indeed move from that riverbank...more than a decade of shivering winters and spring floods was quite enough. Now, in keeping with that bundle of oddness which is me.... I live in a barn Actually, a small apartment thing located inside a barn. No, no hay or farm animals. Just lots of empty space. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Almost scares you, doesn't it... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This awareness is precious, dear Ed. (I am surprised that this name popped into my mind, after your long absence ... ) The barn home must be very nice! Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
living in the outdoors beats a room with only 4 walls and music not allowed My spirit will rise |
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