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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

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Canada

0 posted 2010-11-23 05:32 AM

across to Levis,
I just remember her and I
on the ferry bright
beyond my broken French and her broken English,
a statuesque glimmer shone
from each word we exchanged--
each one announcing our nuptials, then and there
and thus, now, much older,
I reflect on these bright stories--
many sizzling with every affirmation
known to corporeal twists and yearns--
but, this moment,
only Helene, I sing
who so innocently approached me
on a ferry to Levis,
to forever remain
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..circa: Nov. 7, 2010
..Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony; reaching
into the poet's heart
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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-11-23 06:17 AM

Memories. They lurk in the shadows of the mind and give up pleasure throughout our lives. Liked this one, Spiros.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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2 posted 2010-11-23 08:49 AM

Happy memories and a happy ending! Love it! ebm

Sunshine

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3 posted 2010-11-23 09:47 AM

A tender memory, bittersweet among
the planes of time...
I can see the both of you
and hear the whispers...

lovely, Spiros. It is good to
see you posting again.

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

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Canada

4 posted 2010-11-24 03:50 AM

..>>thanks JerryPat, Eusta, and Sunshine
..pleases me you commented so kindly

..Sunshine i have missed you guys and hopefully i'll post more often
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..>>spiros

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

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5 posted 2010-11-24 03:52 AM

Fine writing, memories are such vital part of lives. Thank you for sharing them.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

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6 posted 2010-11-24 04:08 PM

..thanks Prasad..>>nice of you to say

..spiros
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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2010-11-24 06:14 PM

As a fellow poet and Canuck I have to say I'm glad that you shared such fine experiences with Helene. Too bad things have to end with time but those memories are forever.

Eric

Sunshine

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8 posted 2010-11-24 08:27 PM

I do hope so, Spiros. I do hope so.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2010-11-30 12:19 PM

Nice...James

mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

10 posted 2010-11-30 02:08 AM

Good work I enjoyed reading your poems.

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

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11 posted 2010-11-30 02:44 AM

..hello, James and Mike..>>thanks very
much for reading and kindly commenting

..>>spiros
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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

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12 posted 2010-11-30 03:07 AM

This shimmers with depth of emotion... very well said

~A

A pile of scribbles here:
http://sharonleighpoetry.blogspot.com

Spiros Zafiris
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13 posted 2010-11-30 11:24 AM

..thanks Amaryllis..>>nice of you
to comment so kindly..>>spiros

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