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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-11-22 09:54 AM





Cleaning the bathroom
Wouldn't be so bad
If I didn't let it go
Until it got that bad
But I'm beginning
To think
I'm doing it
Intentionally
Because when I'm done
I know the feeling
I've made a big difference
Somewhere in this world

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-11-22 10:01 AM


Starting where it ends...
is a good thing.

But this has more levels than pinesol, doesn't it?


Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-11-22 10:15 AM


Yes ma'am it do!
ethome
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3 posted 2010-11-22 10:19 AM


Unique ambiguity EBM
I see it as scrubbing the whole world in the mind's eye of great results.
There now, whadaya think of that analogy?

Like the Sunshine one says it's got a liberal base for clean speculation.

Eric

Eusta B. Mae
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4 posted 2010-11-22 10:26 AM


Eric-Me thinks I likes your analogy just fine!
JerryPat
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5 posted 2010-11-22 12:53 PM


With good intentions as your guide you are absolutely correct that indeed, waiting until past time to clean dat terlet goes without saying that it makes a BIG difference, not just in this world, but in the cosmos. My motto: when I can't open the door is time to start cleaning a little, a touch here, a touch dere.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
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6 posted 2010-11-22 01:24 PM


I can relate... that`s why we enjoy things like cleaning and gardening... we can SEE the results of our efforts~!  But I do believe we make a bigger difference... it just takes years sometimes before we see the final results.  

Good one, eusta~!
Amaryllis

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2010-11-22 02:25 PM


ebm - yes, what Amaryllis said.  Enjoyed!
2gabby
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8 posted 2010-11-22 03:17 PM


having to live with other people, i can surely appreciate the enormous importance of a clean bathroom!! fun read.
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