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Open Poetry #46

Time (The Teacup)

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2010-11-22 03:30 AM

I wrote this poem some time ago, like a year or so, and after reading it again I've decided to post it, to share it with you all
I Hope you enjoy it!

here we go,

Time (The Teacup)

Time flows
time passes
you see it in your watch, you feel it
you can't do anything about it

but, you know?
I stopped time once
in fact
I still didn't re-start it

one year ago
at home
while drinking some tea
you said you needed time
I gave you time
I stopped it
and the whole house was stopped, too
in the kitchen
your teacup remains there
along with mine

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

1 posted 2010-11-22 05:09 AM

There’s touch of great sadness in this write. Wish such stops, never happen in life.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-11-22 06:58 AM

Excellent. I really know of no other word(s) to convey it any more plainer. Excellent.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-11-22 07:30 AM

Thanks for this, just tea, well I see it all now.
Very insightful!

Eric

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