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"Grace" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A banquet on a table, set! where I've never sat before Massive feasts as set for Kings draped in naive shades of more blushes made the candles sting the heat of flushes as I writhed living those deaths, wondering if my sins are sanctified now that I see them as they are: a banquet on a table, et. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
"draped in naive shades of more" Love this line. Loved the poem period, but there is always that one line or lines which stand out. this is it for this poem in my opinion. To be somewhere (banquet metaphor) where you have never been before and subjected to sights, words and emotion you have heretofore never had can be a wonderful, but sometimes daunting experience. Taking your sins to the limit here. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
where I've never sat before This line, and the whole poem takes me back to December 1999... when I first visited your fair state and city. My only regret is that we didn't know each other better at the time...  |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
A different slant on thanksgiving, serenity... I always enjoy your writes, much depth, here~! Amaryllis |
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