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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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did you hear that no, what a tinkling sound like . . . like those old fashioned music boxes you remember them don't you well, I don't like to date myself, but . . . music soothes the savage beast they say I like my music . . . uh . . . rambunctious well, even rambunctious music can please maybe, but you said it soothes if you want to get picky I guess I did let us go somewhere else then what do you know about the great unknown talking about the stars we see at night the expansive milky way and that big guy up there the dipper there's a pleasing feel about the universe don’t you think can't say I bother thinking about it all that much but you must wonder I, uh, well . . . you must wonder where it all came from everybody, I mean everybody wonders about that mumble,mumble,mumble I mean there are so many theories since man began recording his thoughts concerning the mystery of where it all began don't you think not really, I mean religion counts wouldn't you say humn, I-- but there are so many don't look now but there's a religion for everyone there's one for everyone a religion to fit everybody what's the one that has the big fat person sitting with his . . . you know, just sitting there what's its name religion really isn't my, you know, thing I remember now Buddha, yes, that's the one inner peace that is his claim learning to live amongst the rubble untouched by it tranquility within yourself isn't that good like I said I-- then, of course there are extreme religions you know Islam, its existence is ruled by the sword or so it seems and there are those who fall in between religion for everyone who aren't religious not being religious is a religion in its own right don't you think well, in my opinion— sssh, listen you hear that no I don't, what— it’s a tinkle, tinkle sound makes you want to go to the bathroom doesn't it uh, no not really, I don't— I must go now I always enjoy our back and forth always do will you be here tomorrow I am always here, I am you ©January 28, 2010 / Jerry Pat Bolton . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! [This message has been edited by JerryPat (11-18-2010 11:24 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JP..and I was just saying to self.. "self..oh nevermind, you don't listen anyway" enjoyed your conjur here guy |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Haha! Gotcha, DS. Thanks . . . . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Jerry I thought you got along with that guy better than that? Great fun in this write Jerry....We ALL do it. Eric |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Naw Eric, that guy has the rabies when it comes to hassling me. Thanks. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
"and there are those who fall in between religion for everyone who aren't religious not being religious is a religion in its own right" especially love these lines, Jerry.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Sometimes hating religion is, like I said, as bad at what you hate, and sometimes worse. Thanks, Prasad. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Jerry, I have those little talks too...  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Don't we all ebm, don't we all. Thank you for reading and commenting. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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