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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-11-17 12:19 PM


The heart you broke is in a sad place
The shot that tore me apart was found
In the bed that i was told showed our love
You were someone i loved, can that be replaced?
You moved on within the day, while i laid wide awake
Look at what you have done to me
The girl i love has pulled away without a good bye
I have never felt a knife cut so deep
The blood stain doesnt lie
Can i doubt what i love?

You slammed my soul into the grave
You have left me lonely
Please let me find a girl that can love me again
Can i be sure what she felt or was it a dream?
My heart is broken in two pieces
One left for someone new, and one left for you
Can i pick one now?

The girl of my dreams is slipping through my life
There is nothing i can do
She isnt interested in what i have been waiting for
You have my heart, but can it take anymore?
The death that has haunted it for so long beats it into the ground
Dont let me go away defeated
Bring me back to loving you!!!!!


P.S. this has several meanings to me...

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
1 posted 2010-11-17 04:01 AM


I like this.
quote:
My heart is broken in two pieces
One left for someone new, and one left for you

A heart that is shattered, but holds bits and pieces of those one has loved- is truly an amazing one.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-11-17 07:27 AM


We have to mourn love's death for a period, and then, as you say use what is left of your heart to move on.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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