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Open Poetry #46
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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
Posts 487
0 posted 2010-11-15 05:49 PM


I will still be under the
same sky but in
another country. I
will try my best not
to let our tears
show, nor fall. Creating
mass floods, to overflow
that country, so that
we could still
be here. Our hands in near
reach.
You would laugh with me
at our silly comment
your smile wish
to shed tears as
we say goodbye,
no lets say some day
soon we can, we will
see you
tomorrow.
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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2010-11-16 12:58 PM

Like the positive ending, happy ending are always good. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"
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