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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
My head is weary Of those rocks And hard places Overwhelming again… And I am defeated By dishevelmentation Of my domicile Too many little decisions On what to do And where to go With this and that There are just too Much and many of… I've knick-knacked Myself into padded Rooms of pillows Quilts, comforters And over stuffed Over stacked Everything… Inherited Handed down Sentimental Combined… All Lovingly Generously Sprinkled With Dust |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Melancholy write, ebm. The angst, for want of a better word, shows through the quick, short, clipped off verses. All that accumulation. all that history. Only good for collectors of dust. I quite understand . . . . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Jerry- thanks for understanding. Hugs. ebm |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I understand too, ebm. Any kind of "clearing" is a hard task but got to be done I'm afraid. Good luck. Helen |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thanks Helen  |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
That`s some heavy dust, if the room is padded` with it!  Just kidding... I adore this, ebm... you know, you write my story, so many times. I feel a kinship . All my best~ Amaryllis |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Amaryllis that makes me feel so good to hear you say that  the Blue Buffet has allowed me to for the first time ever in my life find kindred spirits. I am deeply honored you have found that in me. Your comments always make me feel good. Thanks you for all your kind words. Eusta |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
seems we all collect inside things that collect dust as well as "clutter" our psyche.... well done ma'am..and well said. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Amen to that Sir Ron. Thanks for your eyes here. ebm |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Swift and to the point, fine writing this.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Prasad Nataraj-thank you |
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