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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2010-11-07 07:11 PM





In burnished gold of Autumn's shroud,

I feel soft burn of Angels' eyes like fire in the heart.

There is no mourning for these little deaths

in leaves at end of yearning's life stretched

from budded apple greens of Spring's fresh start,

to broadleaves crisply floating proud

through red and amber rainbows in realized desire.


©2010 by icebox





  


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Martie
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1 posted 2010-11-07 07:16 PM


charly...You ARE a poet...I wish I'd written this.
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2010-11-07 08:43 PM


A master poet for sure, Charley. This is flawless.            
                                Ida

Prasad Nataraj
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3 posted 2010-11-08 03:18 AM


Fine writing, enjoyed.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2010-11-08 06:02 AM


"red and amber rainbows " ~~ never thought of it that way, but will every time I drive down the highways in the fall. It is a very beautiful sight here.


M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-08-2010 08:42 AM).]

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2010-11-08 08:34 AM


to all things there are seasons...
truly enjoy your words sir


JerryPat
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6 posted 2010-11-08 10:42 AM


Nice wordplay here.
Amaryllis
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7 posted 2010-11-08 08:42 PM


Gorgeous Fall paint... what a write~!  
Best~
Amaryllis

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2010-11-09 02:49 AM


indeed

excellent

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2010-11-13 07:15 PM


You're so good!!!

This is a real beauty Mister~

icebox
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in the shadows
10 posted 2010-11-15 06:37 AM


Thank you all for your time and kind thoughts.



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